Wednesday, September 09, 2009

The Flood

I stare out the window. It’s still raining. It’s been like this for days. Every day I look and see the floodwater getting higher. After three days, the flood is nearly up to our windows.

I see all the rescue men walking into peoples' houses. Every day I see them walking around in the brown muddy floodwater with it past their waist. I wonder when it is going to be our turn, our turn to get evacuated?

After many hours of waiting, the rescue men turn up to our door. I take my dearest possessions, my book of memories, my cat and our survival kit.

The Village that we got sent to is nice, but I miss my home. Today we heard the phone ringing - it hasn't rang in ages. It was the rescue men to say we can go back to our house.

When we got back to our garden, it was all wrecked. The flower beds all were brown and muddy. There was not one single bade of grass left. We have got trees all around our house from when the flood washed them down. We have weeks ahead of us to clean up.

By Emily

3 comments:

  1. Well done Emily!!!

    This story is truly amazing. It is really like you are actually in a flood.

    Kachina

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  2. Good job Emily this piece of writing is great!

    From Courtney

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  3. Emily.
    This is a really outstanding piece of written work. It works on so many levels, its exciting but also very descriptive and evocative. You really feel that you are part of the story by reading the words that you've written. Its a great piece of work that I look forward to sharing with my classroom, with my students. Brilliant.
    Mr Webb and Room 8, Melville Intermediate School, Hamilton, Waikato.

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